Comments on: can someone please edit my personal essay on service, social justice, dignity and worth of the person, ? http://veryeasyfinancialservices.com/uncategorized/can-someone-please-edit-my-personal-essay-on-service-social-justice-dignity-and-worth-of-the-person/ Thu, 09 Sep 2010 03:36:59 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: Halleigh F http://veryeasyfinancialservices.com/uncategorized/can-someone-please-edit-my-personal-essay-on-service-social-justice-dignity-and-worth-of-the-person/comment-page-1/#comment-974 Halleigh F Wed, 11 Nov 2009 20:52:59 +0000 http://www.veryeasyfinancialservices.com/personal-financial-services/can-someone-please-edit-my-personal-essay-on-service-social-justice-dignity-and-worth-of-the-person#comment-974 You got an e-mail??? I'll send you my revisions in a rtf document so you can see it... I put my corrections in bold... One thing I will say is that you write very well.... There's actually hope for the next generation... The only thing I really saw, other than my corrections, was you combined clients and social workers together.... You say "our, we and us." YOU are the social worker, not the clients and not the family. You need to make that distinction. If you don't understand what I'm saying just message me and I'll explain a little better.<br><b>References : </b><br>I've tutored for 4 years and I have read, revised and written countless papers. You can also e-mail me directly... let me know, if you'd like... You got an e-mail??? I’ll send you my revisions in a rtf document so you can see it… I put my corrections in bold… One thing I will say is that you write very well…. There’s actually hope for the next generation… The only thing I really saw, other than my corrections, was you combined clients and social workers together…. You say "our, we and us." YOU are the social worker, not the clients and not the family. You need to make that distinction. If you don’t understand what I’m saying just message me and I’ll explain a little better.
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I’ve tutored for 4 years and I have read, revised and written countless papers. You can also e-mail me directly… let me know, if you’d like…

]]> By: Seeker http://veryeasyfinancialservices.com/uncategorized/can-someone-please-edit-my-personal-essay-on-service-social-justice-dignity-and-worth-of-the-person/comment-page-1/#comment-973 Seeker Wed, 11 Nov 2009 20:23:59 +0000 http://www.veryeasyfinancialservices.com/personal-financial-services/can-someone-please-edit-my-personal-essay-on-service-social-justice-dignity-and-worth-of-the-person#comment-973 Do you ever wonder why so difficult simply to live?<br><b>References : </b><br> Do you ever wonder why so difficult simply to live?
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]]> By: D. http://veryeasyfinancialservices.com/uncategorized/can-someone-please-edit-my-personal-essay-on-service-social-justice-dignity-and-worth-of-the-person/comment-page-1/#comment-972 D. Wed, 11 Nov 2009 20:18:59 +0000 http://www.veryeasyfinancialservices.com/personal-financial-services/can-someone-please-edit-my-personal-essay-on-service-social-justice-dignity-and-worth-of-the-person#comment-972 I am a professional writer and author...as well as portrait artist...and yes--I COULD edit that--but you'd have to PAY me money to do that to read it and then to edit it. Do your homework.<br><b>References : </b><br> I am a professional writer and author…as well as portrait artist…and yes–I COULD edit that–but you’d have to PAY me money to do that to read it and then to edit it.

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